Friday, November 13, 2009

55 Flash Friday

Want to participate? Write a story - 55 words, no more, no less and then let G-man know.... 
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She noticed the old man in poor attire; hands shaky, face red. 'Alcoholic!' Then she spotted the woman, alone, pregnant. 'Promiscuous!' Holding herself straighter she glanced at the unruly family of eight. 'No self-control!' Adorned in her burgeoning pride, she settled into her seat, smug and confident oblivious to the preacher’s words, Judge not or…..

5 comments:

Susan said...

Abolutely Perfect!

Denise said...

Very well said.

Alice in Wonderland said...

Came across this site by chance, and I am totally in agreement! That is a perfect example of todays society!
New follower!

Mary Moss said...

Wow! Wonderful story--and a good reminder to all of us:-)

anitamartin said...

Oooo... that's good! That's really good! Thank you for sharing it with us!